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Reviews For: While I Can

loversdream17
2007-10-30
ch 1,
abuseWow1 I really liked. Great Job and keep up the good work.
I really like how you ended it on what you shall do:

I shall kiss you even longer,

I shall hold you even closer,

I shall listen even harder,
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