THIS STORY HAS SO MUCH POTENTIAL TO BE A LONGER STORY .I HOPE YOU DECIDE TO MAKE IT MORE THAN A ONE SHOT

it was good, a nice bit after the real story. I suppose I'd call bittersweet)

This is beautiful. Brought me to tears.

ohh that was really sweet, sometimes it's just unfair how other people end up having nothing((

I hate you (not really) _ you're so damned good at writing and conveying real-life situations.

Seriously.

Grow up and be a novelist.

so, i never really review for any stories i read (which are a lot)so this is special. You MUST write a story/sequel for Jayce...please. if not ok, but this one-shot really made me fall in love with him!

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! for taking the time out of your busy schedule to write this. It was so well written! For the first time, I felt sad that London and Patience got together, even though I was rooting for them through SM. And you're right, at times it not 'happily ever after' for everyone as you wrote perfectly here.

I would like this story to continue, (since I will miss the characters terribly),this is enough-for now. :) However, when time permits, should your interest to write a sequel intensify, please do! In the meantime, I will be looking forward to see how Sinful Affections ends up!

Ive read you story Sweet Music yesterday and I totally loved it! I loved Patience with her sarcasm. I was laughing a lot :P

This story (one-shot) is totally different, but very nice! I was almost sad for Jayce in the end, but in a good way, if you know what I mean.

I hope you will write another story, but I understand if you're busy (altough that really sucks :P).

Bye Shillh

I wish you could continue it a few chapters in...but then that would probably turn into a story unless you decided that Jayce actually find someone like Patience that he falls in love with...

Makes me all teary...

(sniffles)

Great one-shot! Full props!...But it leaves one sorta hanging...

Honestly, I've read Sweet Music and while I thoroughly enjoyed both and love your writing, I feel like you have a knack for one shots. This story was amazingly written and its style fit your writing incredibly, in a way that it could not fully achieve in Sweet Music-if that makes any sense at all. I loved it and I hope you write more stories like this soon (though I also really enjoy your multi-chapter works and would like to see another multi-chaptered story from you again too...). Okay, sorry for rambling and not making much sense. I just want to say that I love your work and I hope you write something, anything, again sometime in the near future. Thanks for sharing your talent!

-Amethyst.