It's Chad Kroeger. And I think you should send this story to Menagerie. It's short enough. You already know how much I adore this though don't you?

Chillingly beautiful.

I absolutely love the way you've gone about writing this. Your use of imagery is fantastic, and one can really picture everything that is happening.

What's more, you can almost feel the passion in her dance and her gaze, something I attribute to your stunning writing.

This was lovely. I hope to see more from you!

Cheers,
Sammy