This was a nice read. I actually started this story with high hopes, because your story pulled me right in. The thing is that there wasn't really a plot and nothing remarkable happened.

You built in a lot of possible conflicts (getting caught by the Chief of Medicine or his daughter, Mark, James' past, Emma being happy with someone else, the wedding) and it all fell flat by quick confessions and drawn out weeping from Emma and brooding from James. I'm not talking drama to the tenth power, but there needed to be more substance to the story.

Like I said, it was a nice story and you really put a lot of thought into your characters.

Anyway, thanks for sharing and I hope my comments were helpful.

Hi there!
Read your story in a few hours...and absolutely love it :) Great romance, minimal drama and I loved how you developed your characters. Oh, not to mention my eyes got teary at chapter 15! I only have a slight problem thou, at Chapter 21. I thought that the ultimate "confession of the past" did not fit well with the "i just got drugged and woke up" thing. It seemed rather inappropriate. But thats just me!

Great job on the writing~

this is such a great story, i wonder why you dont have more reviews its awesome!

I have to say that i don't exactly like your story and I don't detest it either. I'm in the neutral arena. I'm a feminist so, the attitude of Emma wasn't really one that I adored. I was kind of put off by how cliche it sounded, some of the scenes were just a blur for me like you really didn't explain it that much. I'm sorry if I had offended you. I just wanted to say my opinion. Although I did like the plot I mean about the whole one-night stand thing.

I'd read a little of Made to be Broken myself before this book, so somewhere, when you mentioned the first two chapeters were up I knew you were the writer and started humming 'It's a small world'. 'because, thats what it is and thats what happens. Don't ask how i landed onto this book, i kinda fell and did a random search on page 37. And suprise, suprise, this was there.
Did i ever mention...
Your amazingly, amazing...
Writting skills are...
Amazingly amazing...
Or that i just hit my head and halcullanated and saw what heaven was like?
All good things come to an end.
Love...
Kayla Brown.

I had a dog that was put down when i was 11, i took the day off school and cried into Jessie's fur. She was only older than me by 6 months.
Love you for writing... and continuing until you're finished, some AMAZING books + novels.

Did i mention that i have been in the 'Burns' ward of a hospital, and the only thing you could smell was burnt flesh. The only thing i could see was the ash-white body with stumps for fingers and bandages all over her. The fire had been five years ago. She was really nice, but she found it painful to have the bandages changed every day.

I'm practically bawling my eyes out right now. A few months ago I had to put my cat down. I'm 18 and my birthday is in less than a month, I got him for my seventh birthday so he'd been with me for a long time. So this really hit home. I know exactly how she feels.

I like your story so far. It's very good and I'm glad James helped her get rid of David.

I love this story. I have read it twice now.

omg its great xx

That was a really nice ending - I guess especially since I like fluffy things. :)
I started your story a few days ago and just kept reading until I reached near the end. I usually don't like it when one of the two 'lovers' was previously married, but I guess it just fit this time.
Thanks for the good read. :D

The story was super cute even though the writing was a bit simple and bland. You made the situations seem so serious when you write it as though it's not that big of a deal. I hope I didn't offend you, but that's just something I've noticed. The story was really good and I couldn't wait to find out more from the first chapter. Nice job :D

I'm not crazy about the way you introduced Emma's friends. It seems like you were listing them and their lives. It would have been more interesting to read if you took it slower. Emma seems like a fun character to read about and with Barrett in the mix, I'm interested to see what happens. :D

Awesome story! Great work! =D

Just the right amount of ups and downs, with a fantastic ending. It almost reminded me a movie nearing towards the end. I loved it :)

Aww, cute story.
I loved the developement of the characters.
This was so much fun to read.
I just loved it.
The fluff was incredible and the story was realistic.
(:

Aww, I loved this story! It was so cute and I shed quite a few tears as well! Amazing job!