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| ilovevampires2 2007-11-02 ch 1,  | abuseWow. I love this poem. It's beautiful! |
| The Postscript 2007-11-02 ch 1, | abuseGreat job! Be careful of tense - "I've engulfED into a bright light", "I've conferED my soul . . ." Other than that, really great job with imagery and message. Keep writing, k. |