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MacKitty 2007-12-01 ch 1,	abuseYeah, I do like it; I like the juxtaposition between the characters. They have a catch twenty two going on. Hopefully you know what I mean. see ya
Faith Adeline 2007-10-31 ch 1,	abuseI like this. I love how it seems to be a bunch of different ideas, that all tie together. A whole slew of images that lead to one final picture. Keep it up, great work. Faith
Pheniox20 2007-10-31 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful imagery and the way you played up the fast pace of the narrators mind, but still kept the tempo down was brilliant. Very nice work.
Darling December 2007-10-31 ch 1,	abuseI really do like this. The ideas are wonderful.