Brilliant ... absolutely brilliant. I hope you will find the time to get back to this and finish it up. Your flow, characterization and dialogue are spot on and I love the interaction Ian has with others and his overall outlook on street life.

This is one of the few stories I've found that deal with the oppressive and depressive lifestyle that comes with being a street kid and doesn't glorify the corners and alleys.

Bravo and I will be keeping an eye out for more from you.

Matt

Man, I'm loving this story! Ian has had such a hard life but I'm glad that things are finally starting to look up for him and that he's working towards getting out of prostitution. I wonder who Ian's mystery client was... He kinda freaked me out. A graveyard, really? *shudders* Declan kinda reminds me of myself actually, cept I'm not a guy, but either way... I can't wait for future chapters.

I really love this story :] It's just so real and...awesome. Ian's a really great character who annoys you at times but you just can't help but like and be drawn toward him. I really miss Cassius and really want to get him brung back! Although at the same time I'm a bit curious as to see what Ian makes of Declan. But I still want to know what happened with the whole Cassius thing. You should know I'm impatient when I drink caffiene. So, I say you should know right now I'm drinking caffiene. Life can be so cliche, sometimes, huh? Never mind, I'm...off to go...shower. Ignore me. Your life will be easier that way.

First of all, I would just like to say that this is an amazing story and really well-written. You have a lot of talent as a writer. I couldn't stop reading. In fact, I stayed up until 2 AM finishing this despite the fact that I have school today.
You have a lot of talent and I hope to continue this until the end. I look forward to all your future updates.

DAH I love this story, it's just that kind tht when you start reading it, you can't stop. >w< And your writing style is absolutely marvelous.

*headdesk* I really don't know what else to say besides Amazing stotry and keep up the good work! ^-^

YOU ARE ARE TOTALLY AWESOME WRITER! I CANNOT WAIT UNTIL YOUR NEXT CHAPTER COMES UP

Hahaha you stalked Declan's brother ! XD Ah Ireally laught a lot at "cute food" ! Jacky's cuter than the food XD Anyway I'm happy for you ! You finally have a cell ! :D:D:D ah I love it ! update soon please !


Valérie

absolutly marvelous(sp?) i love it, please update soon

Hm...and it gets more interesting

Can't be arsed to log in, but boy, I love you and your ways. You make me lol. Keep it up you yummy piece of work, you.

OH! I LOVED IT!
Then again I always do, I've said it once and I'll say it again, your writing style really does remind me of Scott Heim - did you ever check him out by the way? I get so excited every time that you update because the chapters, no matter how short, area always so good! GAH!

I really love the way that you do dialogue, it's so real, so human. I love dialogue that seems real - so many people take the awkward moments out of speech, and you put in everything from awkward wording to excessive ellipses...I really do love that.

I also love Declan - he seems so broken and so sad! He needs someone to show him the good things in life again...someone like Ian! Yes? I know they're going to be together, right? GAH! Sometimes I'm just a bit of a hopeless romantic...and I've been rambling on here for a very, very long time so I will leave you with just a few thoughts.

1. YAY! He got a shiny cell phone! That's pretty fantastic! I Love my cell phone even though it was the cheapest one and hardly even calls people anymore (yay for having cellphones for 3 years!)

2. I REALLY hope that Ian manages to get through to Declan because I think that they would be a very, very cute couple.

3. Update soon please? You have to!

Haven't commented for AGES sorry
doesn't mean not reading your story I'm hooked hehe
WOW I love it :) I check often to see if you have updated
you write so well
I agree with Becky good enough to publish
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Yay! Finally! :D
I can't wait to see what happens with Declan! ^_^

Yay. This story entertains me. I'm glad you updated. And the phone-- the phone is good, too. And the stalkee's brother. INteresting chapter. I like it.

Aw, I liked this chapter!
Ignoring the fact I grinned like a loon when my boy was mentioned, I felt so pleased when you finally got the phone! I gave a mini applause and everything. See how hooked you have me? It's unbelievable; I love it.
Can't wait for the next chapter, chickadee.
Your addicted fan, Becky (:

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