Very nice again as always. I'd have to say your songs are getting better. This was meant to be a song wasn't it? I find it to be worded quite well I especially like:
Inhumane poison in your veiins
Enhance the pain
It sends quite the shiver through me. I really really like this as I can hear the melody in my head. A lot of your stuff really makes me want to sit down at my piano and write. I say it again VERY nicely done.