Reviews for A Befitting Demise

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Vicious Hyperbolizer 2008-06-07 ch 16,	abuseAdorable. Cute. Amazing. Ack! Update! Love! (in my current swoon-y-sleep-deprived state, that is as good a review as will possibly make sense)
Catseye*Rose 2008-05-19 ch 16,	abuseAh, I really like this so far. The characters are very amusing XD And it's a nice balance of seriousness and humour, which is great! Can't wait for more!! ^^
Kenya Bloodstone 2008-04-30 ch 16,	abuseOMG I loved this chapter! Jonny is so amusing and I still adore Lucky. I found the kissy scene with Clem and Teddy to be adorable and laughed really hard when Jadyn walked in on them. Hey if I walked in I wouldn't be complaining so hot! lol... Keep up the good work and so many many kudos to you. Much love
patsylooj 2008-04-26 ch 16,	abusewell, i died. ... so yeah, might i just point out the best part of the this chapter now? "Score!" Hunter exclaims loudly. Upon receiving everyone's bewildered stares, he raises his arms victoriously and adds an excited, "Booze!" so hunter. as of now, he is my favorite. and it's so cute how lucky had to have his kool-aid poured! i hate like ten little mini packs of those in my pantry because my sister's friend hoarded a bunch in our house for some reason. but i can't make any 'cause i'm whitening my teeth and such a drink will inevitably stain them. IRRELEVANT MUCH? and, yeah, so sad with clemmy's little breakdown and all. poor, poor boy. Broseph. :] and jonnaywonnay is pretty cool too. i hope him and the devil hook up or something. and might i say that i'm jealous of your attendance to the my chemical romance concert? gerard way is an absolute genius in my opinion, and i'm picky about my geniuses. they must be amazing. and that story about the kids throwing crap at you and you friends is priceless. so, yeah, WRITE FASTER. no, i can't say anything after my ten-million frickin' month wait. besides, i love this too much to get mad. :3 wonderful.
Musickk Darling 2008-04-26 ch 16,	abusealsdjfalskd i so want clemency and lucky to get together...NOW haha something about these boys and how they like each other makes me - very happy can't wait for more :)
Ty Taco 2008-04-25 ch 16,	abuseI'm pissed about the lack of update...but I forgive you. Cuz I luurve you. An I'm just cool like that. This chappie was pretty cool. The slap was the bestest though. xoxoxo, Ty
Le Soleil Avant le Crepuscu... 2008-04-25 ch 16,	abuseOh my goodness, you live! Haha, Jadyn is my HERO!
Quinty 2008-04-25 ch 16,	abuseYAY! I was worried that maybe YOU died! I kept wondering... where's the update?! I want one NOW! And now I got one :) I don't think this chapter was crap! And I'm glad you started writing about "Mr. Overly-touchy-feely" xD It was cute how excited Lucky was about Kool-Aid xD And this made me laugh... “Nothing. Nothing at all.” I lie, and a plane crashes into my house." xD I thought where you ended the chapter was hilarious too xD AND OMG! You got to meet Frank?! If I could meet them, that would like... complete my life. Oh how I envy you! And that story is pretty entertaining, besides them being complete idiots to you and your friends. I wonder why they had food items and such with them?? Who carries around an entire box of macaroni around with them?! At least they crashed their car though xD Karma! I hope you update soon!!
Bi-curious George 2008-04-25 ch 16,	abuseI loved the latest chapter -hugs- Clemency seems really lovely, even with his, uh, condition, but sadly I don't think the name'll ever really do it for me. We have this German kid at school called Clemens and he's the biggest pervert of all time -shudders with visual memories- but I do my best not to associate him with your character! Oo, oo, oo, when's Clemency finally going to ditch Teddy?? When, when, when? Will there be tears? Oh god no... Anyways, in summation: it was loverly, update soon (I know you've only recently updated it, but all the same) and I'll wait not so patiently. I started writing a little bit of slash myself -giggles nervously to self- and I only put up the first chapter about 2-3 days ago and I've put the 2nd chapter up now too. It's got a few hits, but WHY DO PEOPLE HAVE AN AVERSION TO REVIEWS? Grr :@. Oops! This is a review for you isn't it... Well, to sum up AGAIN: I love it. p.s. when are Clemency and Lucky finally going to hit it off?
Kyuuketsuki-Yaoi Fan- 2008-04-16 ch 15,	abuseOMG! You Have To Update! Is Joshua Ganna Be In The Story Again? ...Of Course He Is...Whats Ganna Happen? Please Update!
.,.,., 2008-04-14 ch 15, anon.	abuseAww poor Clem i can't wait for the next one =) update soon! =D =D =D
paleftw 2008-04-10 ch 15, anon.	abuseplease update soon, bb!
Lucifer's Retarded Twin Sis... 2008-03-30 ch 15,	abuseCant wait for next update!~
Jumping-Loveliness 2008-03-19 ch 15,	abuseThis chapter was great! I love how Clem and Lucky are when they're around each other. I feel sorry for Clem though. His secret isn't safe anymore. I'm sorry I haven't been able to review sooner, but I swear I'll try to keep up with it now.
Le Soleil Avant le Crepuscu... 2008-03-18 ch 15,	abuseWell, you totally deserve all of your reviews, because you so totally rock! (...Squirt! Hehe, sorry, Finding Nemo line popped into my head. ^^") Moving on... >.> Hehe. Le Gasp Clemmy and Lucky almost kissed?! O.O Why, WHY, did that branch have to attack the tent at the wrong moment?! v.v And poor Clem, having a panic attack... And then there's Hunter, "Dude, Clem, are you dead?" Hehe, comic relief. So, definitely loved it, keep it up! Peace, ~Soleil

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