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bookwormhottie 2008-10-05 ch 50,	abuseloved it
sally plummer 2008-09-06 ch 50, anon.	abuseI loved this read! It took me two full days off to read it. I just felt like their was abit to much discriptive sentences in it and it made my mind drift off a little bit. But well done! Im australian so be proud of urself the it hit australia! =)
Wolf Wonderer 2008-07-17 ch 50,	abuseOkay, I... liked this story. I hesitate because it seemed every time there was inner dialog, it was always about blackmailing and second guessing the other's actions. A lot of it didn't make sense , at least in a realistic sort of way.
Sammiee. 2008-07-14 ch 50,	abuseWhat a heart sweeling story. It was amazing, and I'm so happy for Dan and Bekah. Great job, sweetie.
IiotComputerLetMeOn 2008-06-22 ch 1,	abuseThe teacher doesn't seem like her type but I'd like to see where it could go.
Yva 2008-06-08 ch 50, anon.	abuseReally good story, I myself am not religious- but I think it was one aspect that really enhanced this story. Plus, there were believable characters, the only thing that I felt was hard to get my head around was Dan calling everyone 'Woman' it seemed slightly degrading I guess?
Aranalany 2008-06-07 ch 1,	abuseWell hello there o= I noticed that authors love to get reviews, so I'll add my 2 cents. Well, that was a very nice story, probably one of the best I've read concerning the student/teacher relationships (though I haven't read a lot of them, they're hard to find). Even though it is kinda long, it's not at any moment boring. And even though I don't really like christian stuff, well it didn't matter too much since it's very nicely written. All in one, thanks a lot for letting me read such a nice fic, and keep it up =p
Pixy 2008-05-31 ch 50, anon.	abuseI think ur a very talented writer, u've done an amazing job. Last night i was up till 2.00am reading ur story. Its not fair that u cnt get stories like this in the libruary. I rely lke the concept of forbidden love n i knw the feeling of avin an infatuation wid ur teacher. I like to write myself as well, but i avent had time to finish wat im writin at mo. I feel all ur chapters were very emotive and eventful, u cud rely understand the characters feelings, their emotions. I luved the ending but i cnt help but want to read more about them, their continuing relationship n wat happens nxt. I wnt 2 see the more 'bolder Dan' and their struggling physical attraction especially since she is legal nw. So plz let me knw if u decide 2 write more on Bekah and Dan. Well Done and Congratulations i knw it cn be difficult 2 write wen u ave a lot of crap goin on. Email me bck if u wnt 2. The only critism i'd gve is if u cud incorpoarte more of Dan's feelings, more of his thoughts towards Bekah so we cud understand him better, also u cud possibly reduce some of the flashbacks which take up a portion of the story focusing on the past instead of moving on and mkein the story seem to 'drag on' slightly. But then again these are just my thoughts n ultimately its up 2 u. Thanks for givin me sumtin amazin 2 read. Wish U Luck for future stories. Sorry 4 writin an essay, but its very little 2 hw u shud be applauded for this wrk. P.S Have u ad any of ur work published? Let me knw if u ave a sequel!
Asherah Seirei 2008-05-31 ch 1,	abuseI love the ending, sort of an in-your-face HAHA to Mr Fields. I don't think Bekah seems crazy. So far, I like her. I love stories like this. I'll have to read both this and the original. =^^=
Justagirl9311 2008-04-20 ch 50,	abuseAwesome! I absolutely loved this story so much!! I started crying during some of the chapters and was cracking up during others. I also had one question. While I was reading this there were some chapters almost EXACTLY like ones in your other stories...was this on purpose or accident? Or did it just happen to work out that way?
vitreous 2008-04-13 ch 50,	abuseI LOVED IT!! I haven't been able to read any of your story since chapter 40 because I had to sell flowers. I'm gonna be a missionary! :D But the story was really great. You're a very talented writer.
jacksy 2008-04-05 ch 50,	abuseI just read about the last 10 chapters all at once, I hadn't realised you had updated! This is a fantastic story, really well written and put together, I have read bits and peices of the other Rose and Dan stories, and I have to say this one by far is the best. Although I'm agnostic and have no particular knowledge of any one religion, the way you convey their spiritual connection is very well done, and you can completely see why that adds a higher and deeper level to their relationship. Although at the end you don't show how their relationship goes on to be, I like that factor to it, because the reader can make up their own mind... or maybe your are going to do a sequel, who knows? lol, It really is a good read, and I will definately be reading more of your work.
Lady R 2008-04-02 ch 50,	abuseYes, that was pure fluff...but I loved it! To be honest, towards the end of this story, I was losing interest and wasn't sure if I wanted to continue reading any more Bekah/Dan stories. I don't know if it was because of the fact that it's March and now April and the Christmas play had not yet come, or I was getting bored with the teacher/student storyline. I'm sorry, but I am just being honest. However, since reading the ending, I'm looking forward to seeing their more mature relationship develop. I'm interested in seeing what kind of drama you have in store now that they can freely see each other. I'm curious to see more of the "bolder" Dan Fields! LOL Looking forward to your next project, R~
Amelie Leah 2008-04-01 ch 50,	abuseThat was amazing. Better than some published stories I've read. Great job! And congrats on finishing it!
caylie 2008-04-01 ch 50, anon.	abusehey I love the story so sad tosee it go if u make a sequal I think it sould go between them now and how it gos after there date n tell they have kids lol

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