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Justagirl9311 2008-04-20 ch 50,	abuseAwesome! I absolutely loved this story so much!! I started crying during some of the chapters and was cracking up during others. I also had one question. While I was reading this there were some chapters almost EXACTLY like ones in your other stories...was this on purpose or accident? Or did it just happen to work out that way?
vitreous 2008-04-13 ch 50,	abuseI LOVED IT!! I haven't been able to read any of your story since chapter 40 because I had to sell flowers. I'm gonna be a missionary! :D But the story was really great. You're a very talented writer.
jacksy 2008-04-05 ch 50,	abuseI just read about the last 10 chapters all at once, I hadn't realised you had updated! This is a fantastic story, really well written and put together, I have read bits and peices of the other Rose and Dan stories, and I have to say this one by far is the best. Although I'm agnostic and have no particular knowledge of any one religion, the way you convey their spiritual connection is very well done, and you can completely see why that adds a higher and deeper level to their relationship. Although at the end you don't show how their relationship goes on to be, I like that factor to it, because the reader can make up their own mind... or maybe your are going to do a sequel, who knows? lol, It really is a good read, and I will definately be reading more of your work.
Lady R 2008-04-02 ch 50,	abuseYes, that was pure fluff...but I loved it! To be honest, towards the end of this story, I was losing interest and wasn't sure if I wanted to continue reading any more Bekah/Dan stories. I don't know if it was because of the fact that it's March and now April and the Christmas play had not yet come, or I was getting bored with the teacher/student storyline. I'm sorry, but I am just being honest. However, since reading the ending, I'm looking forward to seeing their more mature relationship develop. I'm interested in seeing what kind of drama you have in store now that they can freely see each other. I'm curious to see more of the "bolder" Dan Fields! LOL Looking forward to your next project, R~
Amelie Leah 2008-04-01 ch 50,	abuseThat was amazing. Better than some published stories I've read. Great job! And congrats on finishing it!
caylie 2008-04-01 ch 50, anon.	abusehey I love the story so sad tosee it go if u make a sequal I think it sould go between them now and how it gos after there date n tell they have kids lol
Montag451 2008-04-01 ch 50,	abuseVery good story. Love a happy ending! Also, I'm on the sequel bandwagon... but only after you finish your other stories!
Marisa Gittinger 2008-03-31 ch 50,	abuseOH MAN! I LOVED IT! And I'm breaking my "bed time" to be on here. I have a bed time and I'm almost 18 can you believe that? lol ANYWAY! I'd like to see them get engaged/married b/c I don't think I can wait that long to see them say "I do" lol. And everyone KNOWS they're going to get married. :)
shootingstar89 2008-03-31 ch 50,	abuseloved it! what a cute ending! it was worth it all the way through.
Romantic Wish 2008-03-31 ch 50,	abuseYay, a happy ending. :) I loved this story. I love all your Rose stories.
XxXAngels-of-the-DarkXxX 2008-03-31 ch 50,	abuseapplause! GREAT STORY! I want more dan and bekah moments! I also would like a story of rebekah a lot more... out going... i guess you could say. Like more than she is in the other stories. Don't get me wrong I love all of your stories an bekah's personality... I guess just want something a lil different... a lil more. Please keep up the great stories! Hope to see something new from u soon!
Lady Knight 1512 2008-03-31 ch 50,	abuseAW! That's SO nice! What a beautiful ending! I loved it so much. It offered great closure, but also the promise of something more for Dan and Bekah, even though we might never get to see their happily ever after. It was a great idea to open with the diary entry. They're really good for showing the passage of time and inner thoughts without having to go down the flashback route. The language you used for their finally coming face-to-face was perfect too. There was so much there. It was just perfect. That's how i would describe this chapter, and the story as a whole. Perfect. You should be REALLY proud of what you have here, and of the effort you've put in. I downloaded 'Annie's Song' too. I listened to it while reading this chapter and it made me happy. I've heard the song before but didn't know what it was. It set the chapter off very nicely. Now, we both know that i would probably kill for a sequel to this. The lack of family drama the other versions had leave it open for a sequel. For example, you could open the sequel on their wedding day, or leading up to their wedding, and make family drama, both between the Fields' and the Rose's, and also between Dan and Bekah the focal point. The main point of this one, was the fact that the relationship between them is forbidden, so it would be a story of its own. Of course, having said that, you want to make sure you have a solid idea for the story before beginning it, just in case it goes nowhere. That would suck. I know, coz it's happened to me before. sigh OK, lol, this is longer than i thought it would be. As i said, i'd love a sequel but it's still your choice and of course i'll be happy to help with anything else you do. Congrats on an amazing story. It was so worth it. ~Marie
Phantom'sLuv 2008-03-31 ch 50,	abuseThat was AWESOME :D :D :D :D I cant get enough of your stories, seriously. They're amazing I love them, and im deffinetly keeping track of your other stories ~Phantom'sLuv
BasketCase101 2008-03-31 ch 50,	abuseomg! plz tell me there might be a sequel?
MedicineMakeItOkay 2008-03-31 ch 50,	abuseAh...! I'm happy and sad to see this story over. If you have time, please make a sequel. This is favorite Rose story.

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