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| And FOREVER 2007-11-02 ch 1, | abuseThough I happen to like the military, war is never a good thing. Your poem does an excellent job portraying the horrors of war and the impact it has on some people. Excellent job expressing yourself here. |
| Frozen.Angel.Tears 2007-11-02 ch 1, | abuseI love this poem, it is so sad. It tell a story of how so many lifes can be changed by the choice of one person. I really feel for you and your brother. |
| smile for the sunshine 2007-11-01 ch 1, | abuseamazing. you already know this... *mwah* love you! |