I have to hand it to you, you can write. Damn well.
I thought that it was ironic that the title was "Love", because the whole story's just a really a sick, convoluted travesty of love... But I suppose that was the point.
I like it. Some bits confused the hell out of me, but it was otherwise really well done.

hey this was pretty good better than i thought it would be ur good at this u need to persure writting as a career

Beautiful.

I know this was based on Sonic, so I wonder why you didn't put it there. Of course I only know that from being a fan. Animal descriptions weren't given, so these were just normal, regular people.

That aside, I loved it. I love dark stories.

-Maverick87