Reviews for Things Falling Apart

neal 2008-02-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseAH! There's something about this that makes my heart feel... broken. o_o
magalina 2007-11-19 ch 1,	abuseThis was so cute...and kind of sad. I have to read that story now :DD Loved it!
Esquirella 2007-11-05 ch 1,	abuseThis is cute and cool. Will there be more?
Sundown 2007-10-31 ch 1,	abuseI really liked the bond between the two characters, the beginning and more towards the end had a really honest feel to it. The idea of the over-romantic character is actually not a far stretched one as i have met people like that in my life. Same with the Vincent character. Perhaps I really liked this because to a degree the characters resemble people I know. I know you didn't necissarily want reviews, but It's been a while since I really enjoyed a piece on here. One thing that sort of takes away the credibility would be when the main character says something about 'going out'. I think the term just didn't fit...it seemed a little immature i guess. But on the whole...a really nice little read and I do hope you keep the story posted up here.