Hi,
Are you still writing this? This is a really good story and I want to know if Natalie survived.

This story is amazing. I love the romance and the different creatures it makes it way more interesting. I also want to let you know that I love your writing style; it really keeps my attention. Please post more soon!

Thanks
Christy

Just wanted to say that I love your story so far, hurry up and post then next chapter please it's killing me ;)

Crazy chapter! Sorry for not reviewing, I've been keeping up reading the chapters... I just haven't reviewed.

Oh and I thought that Amita was already blind? That confused me...

Sque! Squee? Sque! Twas very good my little writer friend. Xander sure is protec tive of Amita... heh. *winks*

Who is Jo? And "She wished she could tell Tyler goodbye". Don't you mean Xander?

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Chapter, Dani!! Loved it and can't wait for more! =D

~Anna

aw, another sad one, but sweet too. I really like Amita. She's cool! =D Put up a new chapter soon? pleaseplease? I love your story, Dani!

~Anna

Hi there! I just happened to come across your story and found it quite intriging so far. You have a very interesting concept, and I believe that with your writing skills, the story should develop wonderfully. I like how your story has plenty of dialogue for us to get to know about the characters first-hand. However, I do agree with another reviewer than this chapter seem to end quite abruptly with Lex just walking away like that. It seems like a bit of a nasty cliffhanger, but I guess you can say it is a type of writing technique to keep your readers off their chairs. Either way, nicely done story. Hope you'll keep writing!

If you have time, take a look at my story "Willing Tool". I'm in need of some feedback as the story is quite experimental in nature.

Thanks for the nice story. Till next time!

I finally got around to reading again. Really good. Though chapter 6 isn't loading. So I need to wait and go back to read that one alter

Totally AWESOME (yet sad) chapter! I loved it! Keep it up! =D

~Anna

So... wait, Amita has two familiars (the cat and the dog)? :sigh: They're both going w/o telling each other... sadness. This is gonna end badly, I can tell.
I caught a few grammar things while I was reading:
"completely familiar location" just take out completely. The less adverbs used the better (and I think it sounds weird here).
"Walking into the camp he looked around at everything" should be "He looked around at everything as he walked into the camp."
There doesn't need to be a comma before "two years earlier".
"Even despite everything..." take out even. It sounds awkward. 'Despite everything' sounds fine by itself.
"He was the alpha’s son; because of that..." "that" should have a comma after it.

Great chapter btw and thanks for reviewing Blurry!

Another great chapter! I can't WAIT for more! Keep it up, Dani!

~Anna

WOW! I just read the entire thing in one go. Man, this is one of the BEST supernatural stories I've EVER read! You're going to add more soon, right?

~Anna

I dunno... for some reason this chapter didn't feel finished to me. Anyways... just wanted to comment on one quick thing: "Suddenly, Fala’s head was tilted back by a large, gnarly hand." Gnarly is used incorrectly here... I think you meant gnarled (twisted). Gnarly is slang for (usually surfer slang) "awesome" or "radical" or something to that effect.
I just got home from work so I'm gonna leave a real review tomorrow.