Reviews for Bounty: A Hunter's Tale

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Hali 2008-01-27 ch 30,	abuseWho is Jo? And "She wished she could tell Tyler goodbye". Don't you mean Xander?
Scottish Princess 2008-01-26 ch 31,	abuseYet another A W E S O M E Chapter, Dani!! Loved it and can't wait for more! =D ~Anna
Scottish Princess 2008-01-26 ch 30,	abuseaw, another sad one, but sweet too. I really like Amita. She's cool! =D Put up a new chapter soon? pleaseplease? I love your story, Dani! ~Anna
Dexterity 2008-01-24 ch 29,	abuseHi there! I just happened to come across your story and found it quite intriging so far. You have a very interesting concept, and I believe that with your writing skills, the story should develop wonderfully. I like how your story has plenty of dialogue for us to get to know about the characters first-hand. However, I do agree with another reviewer than this chapter seem to end quite abruptly with Lex just walking away like that. It seems like a bit of a nasty cliffhanger, but I guess you can say it is a type of writing technique to keep your readers off their chairs. Either way, nicely done story. Hope you'll keep writing! If you have time, take a look at my story "Willing Tool". I'm in need of some feedback as the story is quite experimental in nature. Thanks for the nice story. Till next time!
Dalik Taltoka 2008-01-23 ch 7,	abuseI finally got around to reading again. Really good. Though chapter 6 isn't loading. So I need to wait and go back to read that one alter
Scottish Princess 2008-01-21 ch 29,	abuseTotally AWESOME (yet sad) chapter! I loved it! Keep it up! =D ~Anna
Hali 2008-01-21 ch 29,	abuseSo... wait, Amita has two familiars (the cat and the dog)? :sigh: They're both going w/o telling each other... sadness. This is gonna end badly, I can tell. I caught a few grammar things while I was reading: "completely familiar location" just take out completely. The less adverbs used the better (and I think it sounds weird here). "Walking into the camp he looked around at everything" should be "He looked around at everything as he walked into the camp." There doesn't need to be a comma before "two years earlier". "Even despite everything..." take out even. It sounds awkward. 'Despite everything' sounds fine by itself. "He was the alpha’s son; because of that..." "that" should have a comma after it. Great chapter btw and thanks for reviewing Blurry!
Scottish Princess 2008-01-18 ch 28,	abuseAnother great chapter! I can't WAIT for more! Keep it up, Dani! ~Anna
Scottish Princess 2007-12-24 ch 27,	abuseWOW! I just read the entire thing in one go. Man, this is one of the BEST supernatural stories I've EVER read! You're going to add more soon, right? ~Anna
Hali 2007-12-12 ch 26,	abuseI dunno... for some reason this chapter didn't feel finished to me. Anyways... just wanted to comment on one quick thing: "Suddenly, Fala’s head was tilted back by a large, gnarly hand." Gnarly is used incorrectly here... I think you meant gnarled (twisted). Gnarly is slang for (usually surfer slang) "awesome" or "radical" or something to that effect. I just got home from work so I'm gonna leave a real review tomorrow.
KrodanKradAeron 2007-12-06 ch 25,	abusethis has been an epic journey, that I have enjoyed to the fullest. I now know most of the reason why you are so amazing ^^ 100/100
Hali 2007-11-28 ch 25, anon.	abuseUgh... again w/ the cliffies!! Well, sort of cliffie. That was a good chapter. Poisoned lip gloss, huh? That's a new one... can't say I've heard that before.
Kioasakka 2007-11-27 ch 1,	abuseOnce again, you succeed in totally amazing me. Will you knock it off? xDD Haha I'm just kidding. This is really interesting! :D I can't wait to read the rest (it's time for bed so, sadly, I can't read it now :[) tomorrow ^^ Keep amazing the world :3 You're hella good at it ;)
Hali 2007-11-27 ch 24, anon.	abuseThat's all you have posted?!?! OMG... I need to know what happens now... lol you got me hooked on your story evil person!(just kidding about the evil part lol). Update soon, please? And did you ever finish reading Love Should Be a Crime? 'Cause if you didn't, I finished it if you wanna check it out.
Hali 2007-11-27 ch 22, anon.	abuseJust noticing that this phrase "her favorite Serenity t-shirt" is becoming REALLY overused.

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