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| Bella Tenter 2008-06-24 ch 1,  | abuseWow. I added this to my favorites list long ago and never reviewed it - I loved this poem. It's amazingly artistic, beautiful, with a fluid and yet broken flow that deeply captures the meaning at its heart. I love it. An excellent piece. -Bella |
| Lurid Black 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseSweet, gives the reader an image of what one would feel, great poem, keep writing! ~Lurid~ |
| viennacantabile 2007-11-04 ch 1, | abusei really empathize with this. wrote something similar to this quite a while ago (never finished it because i couldn't get through it, so i'm impressed that you did). what you've done with this is really very good. i like the lines 'i want to breathe fresh air and forget/every single memory of you,' and also the lines 'you were meant to forget me and i, you./i was supposed to hate you for all the time wasted/and/for all that you've done.' powerful and moving. |
| something i can never have 2007-11-01 ch 1, | abusethis is... utterly and completely moving. its beyond words - it encapsulates exactly how i'm feeling now, or at least how i feel part of the time (a friend recently died) and this reflects my anger, my pain... even though this was written in the context of romance, it can carry across genres and convey different meanings, which is the true mark of excellent poetry. |
| sweets555 2007-11-01 ch 1, | abusei like it. very good, but if still some of the grammar things had been fixed, it wouldve made the difference. great job, you can feel the emotion |
| Bekahlu 2007-11-01 ch 1, anon. | abusewow, that was really great! I wish I could write like that! I can't wait to read more like it! |
| blackbird follows sparrow 2007-11-01 ch 1, | abuseThis poem seems to have a lot of raw emotion. Me likey. |
| a girl named Charlotte 2007-10-31 ch 1, | abusewell to start off, i'm terrible at poems both reviewing and writing ok so i think this poem is relateable because everyone has some person that they don't want to see and just want to simply forget. the emotions in this poem are obvious but unique in a way that only the narrator understands. so how was that? good enough? like i said: terrible when it comes to poems (not that i'm great at anythingin general) |