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| ilovevampires2 2007-11-02 ch 1,  | abusedark, yet beautiful. i like it a lot. |
| The Postscript 2007-11-02 ch 1, | abuseReally beautiful - especially the second half. Beginning with "I live in a massive sin/I regret far too much/To forgive myself" and continueing with the jar imagery . . . there is really a lot of complex emotion here that people often overlook. As said before, I really like the jar imagery. I think of a firefly in a jar with dirty muck inside, desparate to find a way out. Great job! Keep writing, k. |
| ThETrutHAbouTCaseY 2007-11-01 ch 1, | abuseThere are a couple things that don't fit within this poem. If you want the full list, I have it on my profile. I'm trying to be hnest here, so please don't freak out on me. You should really pay attension to number 2 on the list. Best of luck, and keep writing. Never give up |