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| sifer 2008-10-05 ch 1, | abuseThis one seems like something I would write. lol I don't think you need to write such things anymore being as that one little thing that you hated so much changed, I only hope one day I too will stop writing such poetry. |
| A. M. Nelson 2008-07-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful, the imagery was great and the poem was so sweet. I liked it a lot. |
| mizu no kokoro 2007-11-12 ch 1, | abusesuch lovely imagery. disconnected- but that is what good poetry all about. keep writing! |
| Wolf Ravensoul 2007-11-05 ch 1, | abusePowerful stuff. Plenty of emotion poured into it. I especially liked the lines "I cannot be without the powerr of your heart devouring my soul, The fiery waters of what is you drowning me so pleasently." Gives you tingles that one and no mistake. Good ethereal imagery in there too. I liked this quest for a soul mate. This is the good stuff. Keep it coming. TTFN. Cheers Wolf |