Hejsan! Jag tänker att det är en jättebra berättelse.
När skall du uppdatera del tre? Det är länge sedan som du har avslutat Heritage. Jag vänta spänt!

Hi. This is a very interesting story I have read all of it and very much original thought out edited well and your writing style is great and please post book 3 soon
With the best of luck
Poetry's Angel

Hello!
This is Carrie- I have finally gotten an account on FictionPress! I was just dropping a line to see how this story was coming along- amazingly it's been almost six months since you finished this last book!

Feel free to e-mail me at stephanie..

sorry for not reviewing sooner but i was honestly captivated from beginning to end. I started reading the first book when you first started posting chapters and i'm really glad you have finished two books already! I get addicted to certain stories and have to read them over and over and I have to say this story is definitely one of those.
I can't wait to read the third.
There were a few grammatical errors that I noticed but nothing big.
You have a real flair for writing.

It's very sad that for the second book in a row, someone important to Natalie has died at the end of a book.

But it was beautifully and sensitively done.

I love the "love" bit at the end.

Regarding this "break" though... hopefully you don't mean to leave us for too long, right?

I'll keep an eye out for the beginnings of the next one, in your own time.

Ah!

But that's not a bad AH or even a scared one. That's a "Oh my goodness that was amazing chapter I want more" ah!

I love the revelations and the action.

Can't wait to see the conclusion and the amazing work that's sure to follow!

Ah! So cool. She now has her own Mithrades and all three pieces.

Can't wait to see what happens!

Yes!

Cool... 2 down 1 to go, right?

And only four more chapters in this book!

And it's great!

And only seven days till the next update!

Cool! It worked and they can get Sandrine's stone. Things are beginning to speed up for sure.

Well, keep up the good work and I can't wait till next week's chapter comes up!

Ooh, I wish I could see where this went. I guess I'll have to wait till next week. I hope that the reference to Bonding in that doesn't mean the disastorous results.

Well, anyways, I can't wait to see where Ava and Natalie go next.

Yay, we're in the twenties now! Only seven more installments left in this book and then on to book three!

I feel like this story is just slowly building... slowly.

Not anything against you, obviously- it's great literary work- but I just am so anxious to see what happens each week!

Obviously, though, Cecily can see Ava. I wonder if there's some little twist to this- I don't know- mere conjecture.

Anyways, I need to shut-up now b/c I am rambling. Adieu!

London...ooh, that sounds like fun.

This chapter was rather uneventful- more of a continuation really. But none the less, your next update is much anticipated...

Sianara!

Ah man- this is the point in a story where the action is going and all you can wish is that the story was completely posted.

Chapter to chapter like I was able to do with the first book.

Oh well, my suspense shall bind me to this computer until next week when we'll finally get to see what happens next.

Thanks for Writing!

Sorry that I missed last chapter!

I got busy and the internet and life. This is a very interesting development though. Hm... We shall have to wait and see what this means for the lovely protagonist!

Can't wait to see what you have in store!

Yay! Happy updates.

Good to see the update and I really can't wait until we get some more action. I could be termed an actionaholic.

Well, through another long week until the next update!