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| Ty Taco 2008-05-09 ch 29,  | abuseOMFGSH!! I love your book. I love it so much. I am so Kael. lol I really truly am. And I love you for writing this story. But I love everyone. So thats ok. Anywho, Write 30 soon. Update. And please...for christ's sake, make it a happy ending. I hate slash novels with sad ** endings. lol xoxoxo, Ty |
| Ty Taco 2008-05-09 ch 9, | abuseI have to review. Your story is hilarious. I will review more later. xoxoxoxo, Ty |
| the-truth-is-verity 2008-04-27 ch 29, | abuseek!! okay... well, i guess it had to come out sooner or later, huh? very good. bit tense, but not a bad thing. and nice cliff hanger. please update soon :P |
| Midnights Scream 2008-04-27 ch 29, | abusehe runs away a lot, but I can understand it, but he might want to try a different approach soon. :) good! |
| Beautiful. Insane. Perfect. 2008-04-27 ch 29, | abuseNO! 35 CHAPTERS! 35! Joking lol... If it ends, it ends, it's a ** brilliant story anyway! =D Peace x |
| Purpleriho 2008-04-26 ch 29, | abuse...so not cool...my heart cracks a little every day you don't update. :( |
| kurstin.burstin 2008-04-26 ch 29, | abuseI can't remember if we ever met Kyle. For the longest time I thought he died, and that's why Aeson was so upset about it. Then I remembered (I think it's what happened) that their parents or something found out and said that Kyle couldn't see him anymore. I don't recall. I don't know I really wanted to meet him, but I'm so happy it's gonna end soon. I hope it's a happy ending. i love Kael. He's so melodramatic and unique. He's so unbelievably selfish that it almost makes him look selfless, if that even makes any sense. I don't know, but this story is absolutely amazing, and I'm somewhat sad it's gonna be ending soon. :/ |
| Sherubii 2008-04-26 ch 29, | abuseWoot! that was graet (and about friggin time! jk.) that was a wicked one. what suspense! I can hardley stand the impending wait for an update! I really want to know how this is going to end. Your writting is incredible. it's got good rythm, and good word choice, and it's absolutly hilarious! Keep up the amazing work! |
| NOT an emo freak 2008-04-26 ch 29, | abusewhat is Kael's favorite color? how come you abbreviate "favorite" "Fave"? because the long version isn't spelled like that. and this can't seriously be the next to last chapter! I mean, just no! Not possible! not allowed! |
| the-truth-is-verity 2008-04-02 ch 28, | abusewow. well this is rather amazing :D its really really good. you should be very proud of it :) i absolutely adore it. keep writing, and please update soon :) |
| Midnights Scream 2008-03-30 ch 28, | abuseI get how he works, but urgh the huge amount of self-pity is obnoxious. He could've had a real relationship with Sash if he actually wanted to,etc. he just screws it up. |
| bugger off 2008-03-28 ch 28, | abuseomg... NO MORE! *screams* not that i can do decent screams at the moment becoz of my cough, actually i cant even scream properly ... but... i rly like this story. :D |
| bugger off 2008-03-28 ch 24, | abuseloved that poem. totally awesome. :D |
| Beautiful. Insane. Perfect. 2008-03-15 ch 28, | abuseOh, I love this story... It's getting more interesting...I wish Aeson would hurry up and be gay...=P Peace x |
| Sara Frisch 2008-03-13 ch 28, | abuseThis chapter was a little out there, but I liked it anyway. Keep writing! |