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| Mitochondriac 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseI love the way your words became such clear pictures in my head, really REALLY pretty imagery! makes me want to draw...something, something pretty! Keep it up, its really great! Hachel p.s thanks for the review, I'm so relieved that you didnt hate it! And thanks too for actually giving feedback, it was very sweet! |
| whispered something profoun... 2007-11-17 ch 1, | abuseI like this a lot. The idea of cutting being related to love by saying "cherry red xs and os" was original :) and I liked "I know not when they began". Poignant. |
| Arafax 2007-11-08 ch 1, | abuseExcellent work as always, my friend. Sorry I haven't been reviewing much. I haven't been feeling very good lately and I hate to give an even lamer review then when I'm feeling alright. lol ~Arafax~ |
| Princess-anna57 2007-11-07 ch 1, | abuseOh wow, this is so powerful. I like the way you've written about this concept. Excellent. Well done and write on! ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| Imaginary Strangers 2007-11-01 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was pretty intense. There was a sort of fantasy element blended into it, between the italic font and just the content, but I liked it that way. I thought it would be a little less refined than this, but I really enjoyed the poem! Great job. |