Oh my goodness. Wow. I can definitely see now how MUCH imagery my poetry lacks. Amazing. Simply amazing. I'm not really one to critique, and honestly, I wish I could. The emotion shown was almost overpowering. I could feel my hands shaking with the suspense as the man cried out to God to be better than him. An amazing tale of sin and consequence. You took a cliche moral and made it a completely new, thrilling story. Awesome, absolutely AWESOME work. If I only my pencil could fly like yours. What inspired you to write about this particular topic may I ask?