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| Kenny's Friend 2007-11-09 ch 2,  | abuseThis is by far my favorite work of yours. It was breathtaking - quite literally, especially the stunning conclusion. I could feel the hopeless horror and the guilt of Hayden, and the visual imagry was stunning - I could really see this one playing out. On top of all that, I did not find any grammatical errors, aside from upload errors (no spaces between some words). I'll say it again, this is by far my favorite. Keep it up, Matt - seriously. This was insane. Humbly yours, "Ken's Friend" |
| Darkly Dreaming 2007-11-03 ch 2, | abusePoe is my all-time favorite writer, and I love this poem. I say that there's a fine line between genius and insanity. What you've written here is on that line, perhaps leaning towards insanity. I think that's a good thing. Good job, keep writing, and maybe you'll get paid for it one day, if you aren't already, lol. ~*SRC*~ |
| FrankCastle09 2007-11-01 ch 1, | abuseWow, you've got a fantastic piece here. I just finished it and amazed by how well written and dramatic it is. You've truly started with a bang and then ended with one as well. First, let me say you're writing is excellant. Your words and sentences all flow smoothly, they never feel choppy or unfocused. The desciptions are all well done. You don't overdescribe or underdescribe anything, just enough to really suck you in and give you a clear picture of what is happening. It unfolds perfectly with tension and drama and I honestly wish I could write as well as you. Great job. :) |