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| painting andromeda 2007-11-14 ch 1,  | abuseThe last line has some sort of undefined power in it. I can't explain it. A perfect knot at the end of a work. Amazing. Stay well, Stephen |
| The Melissa Occult 2007-11-08 ch 1, | abuseI miss you. -Sean |
| rust phoenix 2007-11-02 ch 1, | abuseI love the images. You use allusion very effectively, and the loose rhyming has a nice sound to it. The last line was a good way to end it. The whole idea to this piece is interesting, and works well with the way it kind of picks up energy as it goes on, then abruptly comes back down (I don't have the words to say what I mean, really, but this is as close as I can come). The third stanza-type-thing was my favorite. |