Full of emotion.

"You are compassion and emotional bruising and the
most complex piece of simplicity I’ve ever seen."
-Just wonderfully contradicting lines that somehow make such perfect sense. The ending was amazing, but sad..
Great job!

and as i come crashing back down to earth,
i applaud you for painting such pretty pictures
and checking me back into reality with
one simple pair of parenthesis...

Just a quick grammar quirk (because I am addicted to the stuff), most of your lines have correct capital lettering, but a few 'most complex piece...' and a few others do not. That is quite irksome, for me at least.
Over all, I really enjoyed this piece. You have sharp imagery that captures what I believe you attempted to portray. *Have a cookie*
-J.A.
Courtesy of the review marathon (link on profile).

Liked the incomparable analogy of perfection and imperfection.

the longing in it is absolutely palpable. I can hear a girl saying the last two lines exactly. and contradictions are the yummiest things. really truly.

That is so sad, I really like this poem. It shows how a girls craving can create an imagination so full of love and lose. Bravo on a brilliant poem.

Wow...
Just...just wow...
The longing really comes through in this. The emotion is so crazily intense.
"most complex piece of simplicity I’ve ever seen."
Favorite line.