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Duuude 2008-09-03 ch 3,	abuseAh. The pov is screwing me up. This was all Matches', no? And the previous chapter was Queen and even before that Danny. So that means both Queen AND Matches want Danny cooties. Is he wanted or what? And he's oblivious too. shakes head I like Matches. He's interesting, plus his name fits him. He's a jock too, how awesome is that? They have like the perfect team. The jock, the mysterious Goth, the flamboyant one, the normal one, the cute, shy one, and the nice one. Perfect team. Haha. Hope you update. =)
Duuude 2008-09-03 ch 1,	abusewhoa. today was my first day of senior year! ! ! ... it's the same as every other year. -_- xD It's ok so far though, you know for the first day and all. Although, there is rumour that my first period teacher is a Class A **, which totally sucks. Argh. Anyway, cool story so far, what with the gay misfits and all. I wonder why Xander's even there, he's so not like them at all. He's all silent and cool while they're freaky, loud and ... well opposite. I'd suspect him of walking around silently, looking all mysterious. Haha. Good so far. =)
Wanabet 2008-06-23 ch 3,	abuseHm, I like it. Something about it says to me, keep reading, so I must continue. Keep writing.
Evilgenius Koji 2008-05-29 ch 3,	abuseI like this quite a bit. Queen is a **, but I like him a lot too. xDD And. I think that Queen and Danny should hook up~. For some reason, I just don't like Matches with Danny. o.0;; Poor Caillou~. Always being picked on by Queen. Whee. New chapter? -hopeful smile-
jayriel 2008-04-20 ch 2, anon.	abuseOkay, something weird happened to my last review, whatever. I really like this, you have a really good grasp of each of the characters and their individual quirks which really comes across as they narrate. Keep it up ^-^.
jayriel 2008-04-20 ch 3, anon.	abusehey this is cool ^-^ Are you planning to cycle through each of the characters in order?
i-see-faeries 2008-02-11 ch 3,	abuseThis amused me beyond words. I love it. The characters are so surreal yet believeable at the same time. This is so unique and interesting. I love it. Update soon?
Megan 2008-01-09 ch 3, anon.	abuseWOT! But only three chapters! And I was really getting into it, too! Ah, I think Matches is my favourite character, actually, with Queen and Xander close behind! I can't wait to read more of your stories...but first, sleep. (at a quarter til midnight, I'll NEVER wake up on time...)
PolisherOfStars 2007-12-28 ch 3,	abuseThis is pretty good. With a hardcore editing job, it could be amazing. The plot line is excellent, it's just written a little awkwardly sometimes and could use some filling out in places. Considering this is written for quantity, not quality, those things are completly forgivable. (: I'm taking Matches home with me. I call dibs. (:
Midnights Scream 2007-12-07 ch 3,	abuseI love them all, but I must say I think Queen is my favorite. :) Matches has a crush on Danny! I like them all and most of their names are very interesting and cool and I want to steal them :) really good job!
Reda 2007-12-04 ch 3,	abuseCaillou does WHAT when you poke him? He SQUEAKS? Where the hell have I heard THAT one before? ROFL! - I love this group of friends. Reminds me of old times. God I miss those days. Just so happens when I get to the not-so-happy ending of this chapter, a sad song comes up on my iTunes playlist. Tear tear cry cry~ ~Reda~
Reda 2007-12-04 ch 2,	abuseHAHAHA Mrs. Tatum. HAHAHAHAHA HA I should have read this earlier. Love all the familiar names. Have me laughing and saying "What Caillou's last name is Wise?" Kind of a "reh" moment there but...funny There are observations I want to make, but I can't because I don't want to give anything away. Yeah. That sounded odd. Yeah. Queen reminds me of someone... There. ~Reda
WTF OMG STFU 2007-11-28 ch 3,	abuseHI! I love this story it is the coolest. Queen is like amazing! I just had to let you know that, he is the coolest character ever. All of them are pretty awesome actually I love this story! Your a great writer and i hope you write more or I will cry...
It's Just That 2007-11-28 ch 3,	abuseNah. You SHOULD like it. And I don't actually think you could've done a better job at Matches, really. Honestly though, I'm surprised you've made it so far on your NaNoWriMo! xD Mine is so sad. Like 800-1200+ words. Because I am lazy like that, y'know? So, yah. Like anyway, I loved the beginning. Much better than last chapter (not too much attitude to swallow and keep down), and I enjoyed the jealous-nessness. From Matches. I thought he was a crazy mofo at first (the way you described him let my imagination run wild!), and yeah. Sorry. Shouldn't have assumed. I want Danny cooties too. ...Well, uhm. Lessee. I bet that Jeremy young guy is a in the closet that just doesn't want to come out in fear of getting around by his parents and the society at large. I know. What a coward. But, yeah. HAH! I was so rootin' for Queen to win 'cos he's cool like that. He'd obviously pack a ** punch or two, y'know? I HAVE JUST SUDDENLY REALIZED WHAT A PUSHOVER DANNY IS. I hate it. I hateitihateitihateit! Someday, I hope he punches or slaps Queen on the face--just because he could. I mean, c'mon. I hate people being pushed-over. It just leaves a cold pit in my tummy. But, in any case. You rock. I love Matches. He's much better than Queen AND Danny put together. You, like, need a cookie or two. ;] Peace.
Catseye*Rose 2007-11-27 ch 3,	abuseI like Matches ^_^ He's so random... Ha, quite the love triangle going on! Or are there more people in on it? :O Ew, watery spaghetti...

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