wow i really like this story
but its so annoying coz i want to read more but i can't
i love all your characters

I like this. What character are you going to do next? I like how we are getting an insight into each of them. Well at least three of them for right now.

Though this story's still in the early stages I can already see it going places. It's well formed and has vivid and original characers. It's been a while though. More soon please?

Ah. The pov is screwing me up. This was all Matches', no? And the previous chapter was Queen and even before that Danny.
So that means both Queen AND Matches want Danny cooties. Is he wanted or what? And he's oblivious too. *shakes head*
I like Matches. He's interesting, plus his name fits him. He's a jock too, how awesome is that? They have like the perfect team.
The jock, the mysterious Goth, the flamboyant one, the normal one, the cute, shy one, and the nice one. Perfect team. Haha.
Hope you update. =)

whoa. today was my first day of senior year! ! !


... it's the same as every other year. -_-

xD
It's ok so far though, you know for the first day and all. Although, there is rumour that my first period teacher is a Class A **, which totally sucks. Argh.

Anyway, cool story so far, what with the gay misfits and all. I wonder why Xander's even there, he's so not like them at all. He's all silent and cool while they're freaky, loud and ... well opposite. I'd suspect him of walking around silently, looking all mysterious. Haha.

Good so far. =)

Hm, I like it. Something about it says to me, keep reading, so I must continue. Keep writing.

I like this quite a bit. Queen is a **, but I like him a lot too. xDD And. I think that Queen and Danny should hook up~. For some reason, I just don't like Matches with Danny. o.0;; Poor Caillou~. Always being picked on by Queen.

Whee. New chapter? -hopeful smile-

Okay, something weird happened to my last review, whatever. I really like this, you have a really good grasp of each of the characters and their individual quirks which really comes across as they narrate. Keep it up ^-^.

hey this is cool ^-^ Are you planning to cycle through each of the characters in order?

This amused me beyond words. I love it. The characters are so surreal yet believeable at the same time. This is so unique and interesting. I love it. Update soon?

WOT! But only three chapters! And I was really getting into it, too! Ah, I think Matches is my favourite character, actually, with Queen and Xander close behind! I can't wait to read more of your stories...but first, sleep. (at a quarter til midnight, I'll NEVER wake up on time...)

This is pretty good. With a hardcore editing job, it could be amazing.
The plot line is excellent, it's just written a little awkwardly sometimes and could use some filling out in places.
Considering this is written for quantity, not quality, those things are completly forgivable. (:
I'm taking Matches home with me. I call dibs. (:

I love them all, but I must say I think Queen is my favorite. :) Matches has a crush on Danny! I like them all and most of their names are very interesting and cool and I want to steal them :) really good job!

Caillou does WHAT when you poke him? He SQUEAKS?

Where the hell have I heard THAT one before? ROFL!

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I love this group of friends. Reminds me of old times. God I miss those days.

Just so happens when I get to the not-so-happy ending of this chapter, a sad song comes up on my iTunes playlist.

Tear tear cry cry~

~Reda~

HAHAHA Mrs. Tatum. HAHAHAHAHA

HA

I should have read this earlier. Love all the familiar names. Have me laughing and saying "What Caillou's last name is Wise?" Kind of a "reh" moment there but...funny

There are observations I want to make, but I can't because I don't want to give anything away.

Yeah. That sounded odd.

Yeah.

Queen reminds me of someone... There.

~Reda