I'm sorry to hear that your story got plagiarised... Yet another victim!! T_T

I'm sure that this would have been a great one-shot!

C

Ps. Do you mind if I add you on MSN, I'm : =]

Absolutely brilliant. Had me laughing out so loud, I probably awoke everyone within a 10 mile radius :)

Aw so cute!


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Ha!
Hilarious and cute story! Loved the 'seduction' part and the race was pure genius!
Really original. =]
Keep it up!

AHAHAHAHAHAHA! I loved this! It was hilarious! I was rolling with laughter! XDXDXD

aw. i thought it was really cute.
and im really,really,really sad that its just a one shot.

You write so well! I love it! And this one-shot! It's so great!! I'll be reading more of your works.

lol. I can't stop laughing or smiling while reading this. Truly hilarious.

I think I'm in love...

THIS WAS AWESOME!! ^^

GOSH, you have better last lines than I do - by like a BILLION miles! OH WOW, THIS WAS HILARIOUS, AND SO CUTE! :D

-toffeecakesxox. // Kristy. :)

hahaha that was cutee

this had me on the floor laughing my head off! i sware. i especially loved the drunk scene. what a one-shot! great job :D

I think I'm having cardiac arrest from laughing so much. That scene at the bar when she went shoosh, shoosh made me go crazy!! Oh god...I'm dying here. Amazing! Genius!!

Lol that was hilarious!
Wow, seriously some kind of ingenious.
WOw!

I laughed so much.
yeah it was fantastic
Are you doing nanowrimo?

Haha, this was really good! It made me laugh, and I could totally imagine it all in my head! Bravo, Brava, it was funny, yet sweet.
Love, Dani (Read my stories! :?)