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| kitty.xo 2008-07-24 ch 1,  | abuseOMG this was so hilarious. it was great! I swear during the "index finger vs. middle finger race" that she did near the begining/middle was SO FUNNY I was laughing out loud and people gave me extremely odd looks. This was great, I loved it :) SO FUNNY and the end was the cutest! Great job! I loved it! |
| Green Eyed Angel 2008-07-22 ch 1, | abuseNope, it wasn't good at all. it was AWESOME! AWESOMELY AWESOME! Seriously, it was great. Though I wish you would have described her in the process of licking his face. i'd probably have fallen off my chair laughing. |
| aussie-crazy-banana 2008-06-05 ch 1, | abusei like it :) |
| chocolatechipash 2008-05-21 ch 1, | abuse*squels. lovelovelove soo cute im going to go read ur other work now. |
| Evolet Blue 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abuseOh I loved it, it was so cute! |
| kendralyn 2008-04-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseLoved this! |
| Songs of an Angel 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseLMFAO! Extremely hilarious!! She's a funny drunk...was laughing my ** off when her fingers were racing and she was like a commentator!! Ahahahaha!! :)) ;p |
| everybodyloveschocolate 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseOh my god! I loved this, it was hilarious. I felt embarrassed for her, for god's sake. Great job! |
| ess3sandra 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseTHIS WAS PURE FLUFF. |
| gagagooga 2008-03-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseit was more than good! haha loved the last line! |
| found.eventually 2008-03-13 ch 1, | abuseHahahahaha. I'm sorry, I can't stop giggling. This is just so adorable! I like the voice you gave to the mc, because you made her sound like... Like what she's supposed to sound like (uhm.) And he sounds hot! XP Wonderful piece of one-shot. Whee! |
| dawnimoya 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abusethis is so cute! i especially love the last line. :D |
| Miss. Paradox 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abuseI LOVED it! Oh geez, that was so hilarious and adorable and squeal worthy, haha. Great job! |
| Hyperroll 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseaw funny and so cute cute cute but not too cliche. it's.. really good =] |
| beingmyself 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abuseI love how he dared himself! |