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| lordelfy 2007-11-02 ch 1, | abuseaww this is really sweet and cute!! |
| Smoky Bear 2007-11-02 ch 1, | abusethe format did my head in, but i guess it was a quick edit thing. it's a very sweet poem, the rhyme was a little obvious but it flows together really well and the internal rhymes balance it. besides, non-poetry people need that kind of thing to get poetry. the content is very heart-felt and lovely. |