Just finished the first chapter! You are off to a great start. Orville is quite enjoyable to read about. This is a great read thus far and I will certainly be reading on. ^^

I like the plot, its very good. But I think it would be easier to follow if you combined some of the chapters. That way the paragraphs flow together without having to wait for the next page to load. The only other thing that I would change, is that you don't really give a discription of Orville. A discription of what the characters look like its easier to picture whats going on in the story. But I will definatly look for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

great chapters. It a real good story. very interesting

a...gross

But looking besides that, I'm curious about the vegetarian werewolf thing