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blots of an amateur 2007-11-19 . chapter 1
though i dont really understand poetry (they just strike me as lines that should rhyme ^^) i can definitely imagine you sitting on a bench park in the sunshine and taking time to enjoy the innocence of the children (cos it sounds like something i would do too :)) really heartwarming^^
Tecna 2007-11-05 . chapter 1
That is such a sweet poem, really enjoyed reading it. Lovely flow to it, loved it.
Tecna ;)
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