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| Sweet Child 2008-06-09 ch 1,  | abuseI loved this, and I really enjoyed the way you kept it a secret until the end that he was actually Keishas' boyfriend. Although, it did break my heart when I found out. It seriously made me want to cry. I mean, I'd probably be sorry for Keisha in that event, but I do believe that the protagonist deserves to be with him. Anyway, great one-shot, as always. |
| TheGeekGirl 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abuseThis story was really good. I could understand the Guy's situation...His confusion, etc. It was awful at the end, I mean...Her Best Friend's Boyfriend? I already guessed that, but it didn't make me feel any better. It's sad and realistic. *sighs* Wonderful story, excellent portrayal of emotions! A thumbs-up, definitely! |
| Pione 2008-05-23 ch 1, | abuse:( How sad. But I like it still. |
| thoughtsofwisdom 2008-05-15 ch 1, | abuse*sniff* that is so sad, I knew it and yet I hoped it wasnt true. WEll written. |
| katieee 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseIm so sad. Again. But I didn't cry. :[ I wish they were together. |
| xoxo1 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseomg, this was totally amazing that was so unexpected, the part about him being keisha's boyfriend i thought it was just a close friend or something |
| P 2008-05-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really like this. :) You should continue the story! :D |
| kiyane 2008-04-24 ch 1, anon. | abusehey, i didn't log in, but i just wanted to let you know that this fic is just beautiful. My friend and I read it together and she burst to tears at the end. i also wanted to thank you for the advice you gave me earlier (sorry i never replied) and it'd be cool if you could work with me on my stories from time to time. that is, only if you'd like. thanks again for the tips and this absolutely wonderful one-shot. ur awesome and the experience shows ;) ~Kiyane |
| Kicon 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseOh that's so sad! But really really good! ~Kicon |
| kardula 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseoh my god, this is so sad, too. sometimes life just sucks. |
| Evolet Blue 2008-04-18 ch 1, | abuseUm...wow. Enough? |
| spring robins 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuseOH MY G-D!! What's wrong with happy stories!? |
| shy green rock 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseAww so she was in love with her best friend's boyfriend? Bummer. He obviously likes her too. I mean naming a star after her and giving her a necklace. Too bad though! Good Job! |
| gossipgalmishi 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseum, you write really great stories but you should write more happy endings? - since lots can't stand bittersweet and start crying...nm.sad story,really heartbreaking |
| floopfloop 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abusewahh !! im gonna go drown myself in tears now ='( that was so depressing |