Wow, I really liked this! I suppose 13 year relationships trump possible love and all. Great story...

Hi (:
I like this. I like you. In a platonic way, ofcourse. D:
Hell, I'd marry you. If you were a guy. I'm sounding like a lesbian right now. Fell free to...Block me?
Oh, whatevs. You should write a story about this. It'd be amazing =D
I'd go all "Hell ya, babesz!"

-Cheerio.

aw... touching story.:D i love it. feel sorry for the girl..

Nice story. Great example of stories that don't have a happy ending.

doesnt he find out wat shes feelin and she stays at that skool they become a couple and live happily eva afta?

Ohmygosh.
That was so sad. I sobbed my heart out at the end. I hate your story!!
Actually, I don't. It's beautiful and sweet and heartbreaking, and I love it. You've crafted your main character amazingly, and that was the best last line ever. Brilliant characters, plotline, everything. The ending killed me, but I love it. It sort of fits, even if it sucks for the girl.
I can't think of anything to criticise.
So yeah. Yay for your awesome story.

OMG...this is soo sad. it all make sense how she kept avoiding him. but i can tell than he has feelings for her. maybe in the future, they could be together.

heartbreaking.. beautifully written :)

This is so sad. Almost made me cry.
I love how you kept me guessing his status right until the last sentence.
The whole story I was wondering, what the hell is their problem? Why can't they admit they love each other already.
Damn, this is so unexpected and ... upsetting.
And he's too nice to hurt Keisha's feelings, or he loves Keisha? That's just what I don't really get.
Life sucks, I guess.
Love the story, love you (as in "my favourite author") and take care.

u should really continue this

You made me cry! Ugh, I never ever cry. Well, apart from now.

I've so been in this position before and you capture it beautifully.

I love this story. Love love love love. I totally did not expect the twist at the end by the way, so good job on that. I cried at the end. But that's a good thing. Awesome story.

OH THE TWIST! But you really managed to do it perfectly! I really didn't expect that one bit! I was a bit confused reading the first half, but when I read the end, I was like, "Oh..". And at made me feel bad for a moment, but the next second I'm already admiring your work. I wish I could write twists as good as you do.
Keep on pwning!

I cried.