Aw...I thought this story was done already. Sort of like a really short romance. Please Please PLeze finish it. Or at least, UPDATE!

This starts out very interesting! I'm curious about both of the characters in the situation...pretty sure it warrants my needing to friend you on Livejournal, because my curiosity knows few limits when it comes to fiction, and you write well. :D

o_o omg. this sounds awesome

Aw, shame. Seems interesting too. I like it.

I'm really, really glad I read this; however, I have no idea how to read the rest of it on LiveJournal since I'm not LiveJournal savvy. I think I'm going to die.

Please continue writing this fanfic. Its really good.

Love the start can't wait for more.

Heyla!
I know you only have the two chapters up here, but this review is for the whole story. Since I cant get into LJ *stupid comp* I am posting it here.

SPECTACULAR, SPECTACULAR!
A MARVOLOUS work of fiction, beautifully done! ...makes me want a tail... *ahem*
I rate it Novel of the Year!

I would suggest you take this to the publishers! I guarantee, if I were to see this on the shelf in Borders, I wouldn't walk out of there without it!
And if I HADN'T already read it, I would surely buy it still, for my interest it would surely catch!

PUBLISH THE DAMN THING!

I think this is a very good setup, please update!

it's good and it makes me smile in an odd way. *sniffle* I wish my ideas were this good. :)

I know you only have the first two posted here, but I'm reveiwing on all first 19 chapters.

This is great! I realy love it. It's much more together than the Mage series, well constructed. Even though I still think the Mage series has more potential and is more fun ;).

I have to say my favorite part though is when he's buying Naeven's lube. :D I laughed my head off!
I was pointing to the screen and covoring my mouth with my other hand *because it was 5 am and i was coming very close to waking the other members of my household* while i laughed.

I love that you threw in things from your other stories, it made it so fun.

I can't wait to read the rest though, so get writing! :D

interesting, it makes me really want to read more. and the book with the mage and the slave? is that in book stores...?

You rock.
A lot.
And thus...
~You get: A CHOCOLATE COVERED CREME FILLED KRISPIE KREME DOUGHNUT! Because it's Sunday...~

I don't suppose it's possible to read any of your stories on livejournal without getting an account?

i really like the way this is looking. roan is kind of adorable and i can't wait to see how the relationship between him and ishaan develops. that said, i'm off to friend you on lj in hopes of seeing more of this! :)