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Capricia 2008-06-16 ch 2,	abuseLove the start can't wait for more.
Jak Refynae 2008-02-11 ch 1,	abuseHeyla! I know you only have the two chapters up here, but this review is for the whole story. Since I cant get into LJ stupid comp I am posting it here. SPECTACULAR, SPECTACULAR! A MARVOLOUS work of fiction, beautifully done! ...makes me want a tail... ahem I rate it Novel of the Year! I would suggest you take this to the publishers! I guarantee, if I were to see this on the shelf in Borders, I wouldn't walk out of there without it! And if I HADN'T already read it, I would surely buy it still, for my interest it would surely catch! PUBLISH THE DAMN THING!
RoughDraftHero 2008-01-29 ch 2,	abuseI think this is a very good setup, please update!
Midnights Scream 2008-01-12 ch 2,	abuseit's good and it makes me smile in an odd way. sniffle I wish my ideas were this good. :)
Jak Refynae 2007-12-04 ch 2,	abuseI know you only have the first two posted here, but I'm reveiwing on all first 19 chapters. This is great! I realy love it. It's much more together than the Mage series, well constructed. Even though I still think the Mage series has more potential and is more fun ;). I have to say my favorite part though is when he's buying Naeven's lube. :D I laughed my head off! I was pointing to the screen and covoring my mouth with my other hand because it was 5 am and i was coming very close to waking the other members of my household while i laughed. I love that you threw in things from your other stories, it made it so fun. I can't wait to read the rest though, so get writing! :D
Rumorunderoath 2007-12-03 ch 2,	abuseinteresting, it makes me really want to read more. and the book with the mage and the slave? is that in book stores...?
SaraMaxine 2007-12-02 ch 2,	abuseYou rock. A lot. And thus... ~You get: A CHOCOLATE COVERED CREME FILLED KRISPIE KREME DOUGHNUT! Because it's Sunday...~
lilylupin7 2007-11-30 ch 2,	abuseI don't suppose it's possible to read any of your stories on livejournal without getting an account?
Vera Dicere 2007-11-29 ch 2,	abusei really like the way this is looking. roan is kind of adorable and i can't wait to see how the relationship between him and ishaan develops. that said, i'm off to friend you on lj in hopes of seeing more of this! :)
Kagome Kaori Gryffindor 2007-11-29 ch 2,	abuseI'm really likin' this story! Ishaan's so awesome and Roan...wow. I can't wait to find out what happens... ...so I added you as a friend on lj ^^;
Xemas 2007-11-29 ch 2,	abuseOh yes, definately a charmer, haha. I want to read more. You say it's on your livejournal, yeah? I'll have to drop in then, because this story is very good.
EverettDKearton 2007-11-26 ch 1,	abuseI never use my livejournal account for anything, but I suppose it's a good thing I have it. Dx I need to read this story now.
Amindaya 2007-11-04 ch 1,	abuseYay! I'm so glad I have Livejournal. :) This is really interesting. I can't wait for more.
SaraMaxine 2007-11-04 ch 1,	abuseYou really do come up with the most interesting stories... Well, meet your new livejournal buddy, can't stop reading now.
Vera Dicere 2007-11-04 ch 1,	abuseo interesting start. i must admit, i was a bit thrown by roan's apparent attraction to the old train attendant until i figured out what he is [assuming i'm right]. i can't wait to see what happens with him and this ishaan. looking forward to more!

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