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| Kimiko Marise 2007-12-06 ch 1,  | abusevery interesting, I like the use of questioning you used in this one, ...it is very unique this topic you chose to write on |
| painted.music 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abusekonban wa *shudder* You know, I'm very perceptive (at least I like to think so), and I think I can get into the mind of people in different situations. I've written poems about people whose fathers have died in war or from illness, and that's -- thank God -- never happened to me. That's just one example, but there are many. But, no matter what I'm able to do, I still can't get into the mind of someone who's sick. I've tried because I want to write a poem from an autistic child, crying out to the world not to leave him on the sidelines. But I just couldn't get into the kid's head. This poem goes along those lines; therefore, I can't do this, no matter how much I wish I could. When I read this -- amazing. Brilliant. I couldn't get over it! Excellent piece. Gute nacht -Shan- |
| LadderInMyTights 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abuseDamn. You don't necessarily get locked up for hearing voices. The upped my Abilify and that was that. But this was good nonetheless. I liked that in the end he was no longer questioning whether or not they kept him sane; he needed them. It's like you've lost a part of you when they take them away. Like, where the hell did my positive and negative side go?!?! Lol. Anyhow, have a nice day ;) |
| the Stranger in the moonlig... 2007-11-02 ch 1, | abuseThis was pretty tragic, but well written... it really caught the concept of being good, though he is insane. ~the Stranger in the moonlight |