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| ohthevoices 2007-11-12 ch 1,  | abuseI was going to say that this is a rather cynical view...except it's true, and I think most people either don't realize the cost of wealth, or they ignore it. Nicely done! |
| 1Wanderer 2007-11-12 ch 1, | abusewell done... the simplicity allows for greater meaning. I like it. |
| Thenardier 2007-11-10 ch 1, | abuseSo true. Just stunned by the blunt honesty here. |
| Chidori Nadare 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abusePeople always desire wealth and who would not want that? But then...it also represents something hollo: a person's greed. This is a great haiku. -C.N |
| Moondog Dozier 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abuseVery abstract and thought provoking. Well done. MD:77. |
| Wealthier than Wealth 2007-11-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseWealth has many indications. Yes, it is somewhat exceedingly hollow. |