wow, amazing story!
i'm going to check your other stories out now.
great work.

Wow...that was really sad. But I liked the bittersweet element. Great job!

Loved it, adored it. I like characters like Emma, those who are not altogether perfect and wholesome. Characters that have a hidden depth and pain which is used to define the story around them. Though i oh so badly wished for a happier ending (hint!) haha, it by itself is ingenious and a heart breaking insight.

It was real, human and raw. Great combination for a good read.

Wow, I'm very impressed, that was really good.

i love the word play in this oneshot.

-speechless- that was absolutely hauntingly BEAUTIFUL. You write wonderfully and i love it. This one shot really made me cry and i was glad it wasnt the typical love angst that ended with a passionate kiss..so kudos to you!
brilliant!
xo's.

i like this story...it almost made me cry when Em's talking about how her sister is deserving of all the pain she gets and what her sis did to her.

Great story- very dark. I really feel for Emma...

Aw, I totally loved this despite the sadness about it. But I get why Emma's leaving, and I don't hate her at all :D

Happy New Year and good job!

~Mia

Beautiful story. I felt Emma's frustration and sadness and understood Owen's feelings. Awesome writing. I really enjoyed reading it, even though it didn't have a happy ending.

Great story. It's so loaded with tension it reaches over a hundred pages not written. If you know what I mean. I loved it.

Dark and disturbing and oh so true. Good to see a little gritty ditty on here. Thank you for sharing.

wow, this completely blew me away. great job, brilliant growth over insert foot. thank you for posting.

I loved this. it was amazing. good job.

bec

Wow.

Not the usual, but still good.

It definitely makes a person think. I can't imagine a relationship like that.