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| wandless 2008-04-17 ch 1,  | abuseWow, I'm very impressed, that was really good. |
| luv me like no other 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abusei love the word play in this oneshot. |
| xLittleBlackConverse. 2008-03-14 ch 1, | abuse-speechless- that was absolutely hauntingly BEAUTIFUL. You write wonderfully and i love it. This one shot really made me cry and i was glad it wasnt the typical love angst that ended with a passionate kiss..so kudos to you! brilliant! xo's. |
| kookoo4kokonuts 2008-02-13 ch 1, | abusei like this story...it almost made me cry when Em's talking about how her sister is deserving of all the pain she gets and what her sis did to her. |
| rainbabie 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseGreat story- very dark. I really feel for Emma... |
| mia5081 2007-12-30 ch 1, | abuseAw, I totally loved this despite the sadness about it. But I get why Emma's leaving, and I don't hate her at all :D Happy New Year and good job! ~Mia |
| Channah 2007-12-21 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful story. I felt Emma's frustration and sadness and understood Owen's feelings. Awesome writing. I really enjoyed reading it, even though it didn't have a happy ending. |
| Kjersti 2007-12-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story. It's so loaded with tension it reaches over a hundred pages not written. If you know what I mean. I loved it. |
| Bob 2007-11-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseDark and disturbing and oh so true. Good to see a little gritty ditty on here. Thank you for sharing. |
| sha 2007-11-15 ch 1, anon. | abusewow, this completely blew me away. great job, brilliant growth over insert foot. thank you for posting. |
| somuchformyhappyending 2007-11-09 ch 1, | abuseI loved this. it was amazing. good job. bec |
| TheArtOfBeingMe 2007-11-04 ch 1, | abuseWow. Not the usual, but still good. It definitely makes a person think. I can't imagine a relationship like that. |
| A Quirky Tale 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abuseI love this story. It's very dark with a hint of romance and it conveys a lot of emotions in just one story and a lot of reading-between-the-lines. It also has a dept and makes the reader wonders what's going on. Good job! =] |
| LondonLi 2007-11-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseBeautiful, but SO SAD! Thanks for the one-shots, send some more! |
| jekodama 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abuseWow, talk about ** up relationships... I wonder what kind of accident Sabrina had, and what's the story behind Emma's birth. I think this one has potential to be a longer story, but not that long, maybe three, four chapters? Anyway, I 'think' I didn't find any typos, but I can't be sure, I'm really sleepy. "It’s pretty ** up that need is a level above love to you". That was an interesting line. I can't understand that kind of relationship. I really wish you expanded more on this story. Until the next review! |