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Reviews For: Inflamed

master.of.all.evil
2008-09-03
ch 1,
abusevery nice ;p
writing a oneshot on how someone became a vampire=] clever
L3G3nD
2008-03-17
ch 1,
abusehaha good use of 1st person narration, good work!

and you should write more, haha!

happy writing anyway!
whonow
2007-11-03
ch 1,
abuseCool. :3 I like the voice you gave the MC. The way you vary sentence length and style is great. Nothing's bland here. I normally don't read this sort of thing -- and by 'normally' I mean 'almost never' -- so give yourself a pat on the back. You know you did well when you appeal to someone outside your target audience. Hehe.

I especially like the bit where Roxanne reminisces about Marigold. Keep up the good work, eh?

- Catfish
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