The ending was nice and worked well, made the poem go off with a nice BOOM!! This reminds me of the I was down and got back up cause I was sick of feeling like a tortured soul, good work.

Maggot.

Magnificience! I really LOVED it! Especially your use of rhyming and the clear word pictures like "as dead as fall's trees" and your sensible statements that we can all relate to like "cheap happiness, low highs, biting cold always." Keep up the good work!