Nice once more. How many times do I have to say that with each poem...I don't know. But nice anyway. I like this, though it's a bit short for my taste it still gets its point across. It really conveys the point I think you're getting at..But I suppose it probably has a different significance to every peson that reads it. That's what makes it a good poem is something that everyone can relate to in thier own way. You have defenantly succeeded in making a very good poem here.

~Dillio~

Hey =) I must say that your rhyming skills are admirable. You really can keep a rhythm flowing very well, and the pain you always weave into your writing adds a good element of emotion. Good job.