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| Faithfully Yours 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseI think you wrote a very excellent piece of poetry that makes perfect sense! That excites me considering my track record with poets like Emily Dickinson... -Shudders- Anyway, the point is good job! |
| Oracle of Destiny 2007-11-28 ch 1, | abusePersonally I loved it - every word and sentence flowed and match eachother in a way :) Write more like this as I really think you have a talent for this. By the way I've updated my story Destiny and I: A New Man so in your own time please have a look at it xD Best wishes in what you do! |
| GrannyP 2007-11-05 ch 1, | abuseNice use of metaphor (is it metaphor, right?... wow, I will feel stupid if I got that wrong). This one is very poetic with lots of interesting imagery. Nice job. GrannyP |
| xXxWritersXBlockxXx 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abusehey, that was really great! I liked it! Terra |
| Artemis Anderson 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abuseThis was beautifully written. d:) Great job! |