Reviews for The Beach at Night

Faithfully Yours 2008-03-30 ch 1,	abuseI think you wrote a very excellent piece of poetry that makes perfect sense! That excites me considering my track record with poets like Emily Dickinson... -Shudders- Anyway, the point is good job!
Oracle of Destiny 2007-11-28 ch 1,	abusePersonally I loved it - every word and sentence flowed and match eachother in a way :) Write more like this as I really think you have a talent for this. By the way I've updated my story Destiny and I: A New Man so in your own time please have a look at it xD Best wishes in what you do!
GrannyP 2007-11-05 ch 1,	abuseNice use of metaphor (is it metaphor, right?... wow, I will feel stupid if I got that wrong). This one is very poetic with lots of interesting imagery. Nice job. GrannyP
xXxWritersXBlockxXx 2007-11-03 ch 1,	abusehey, that was really great! I liked it! Terra
Artemis Anderson 2007-11-03 ch 1,	abuseThis was beautifully written. d:) Great job!