Very good

Wow. This was really amazing. I haven't ever read a story from the the male slave's point of view with his mistress, and I thought this was very well done and realistic. Unique idea, and great writing style.

I don't know why you haven't yet recieved a review, but I must say I'm honored to be the first. This is a remarkable piece of writing, one of the best original pieces I've read here, and I'm glad to have found it. You truely have a gift.