|Reviews for The Red Balloon|
| Zonne 4/19/08 . chapter 1
That is incredibly sweet and touching. I love the way you tie it all together with the balloon. Hopefully many siblings can find a way to love each other like the girls in your story.
I found the torn card and her sister in the room part a bit confusing though. I think you could change that to make things clearer.
Excellent short story.
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