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| fairytale failure 2007-11-21 ch 1,  | abuseI like the way you played with parentheses in this; it makes you stop and think about the double meanings for a second. |
| Professional Dreamer 2007-11-04 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting. I like the style. Confusing, but naturally, as the protagonist is confused. And I sympathise. |
| xxmoonstarxx 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abuseI like this structure too. I can't think of the word to describe this. But I like it. |
| xhaiiro 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abuseThis has such an interesting structure. I like the rawness in it, too. |