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Reviews For: Into the Deep

McKinley Cooper
2008-06-14
ch 1,
abuseThat's breathtaking.

Mckinley
Luna Turner
2008-03-10
ch 1,
abuseYou were right in placing this poem in the mystery category. It definitely has that mysterious tone. In my head, I was picturing a sea godess. I loved the two lines "Nightfall blossoms behing her light/ Haunted by apparitions she's contrived."

Overall, I felt the poem was very powerful.

~Luna Turner
MK
2007-11-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseI kno this one! Hey u found a title..lol

Behind the light lights secrets unknown..isn't it lies secrets? jw.

anyways awsome!
alexis
2007-11-04
ch 1, anon.
abuselove this one! nice title =p
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