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McKinley Cooper 2008-06-14 . chapter 1
That's breathtaking.

Mckinley
Luna Turner 2008-03-10 . chapter 1
You were right in placing this poem in the mystery category. It definitely has that mysterious tone. In my head, I was picturing a sea godess. I loved the two lines "Nightfall blossoms behing her light/ Haunted by apparitions she's contrived."

Overall, I felt the poem was very powerful.

~Luna Turner
MK 2007-11-12 . chapter 1
I kno this one! Hey u found a title..lol

Behind the light lights secrets unknown..isn't it lies secrets? jw.

anyways awsome!
alexis 2007-11-04 . chapter 1
love this one! nice title =p
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