This is nice because it's simple but it explains a lot.Maybe it could be longer?

i like this chapter! we're doing a shakespeare unit write now and i am so proud of myself for actually understanding this. good job. =]

good ending, good poem. I can't wait for more than you. Keep it up.
Stay strong.
Faith

great poem. Isn't it nice to be able to just breathe and now it's okay? I loved it. Great job.
and p.s, I agree, don't take shit from anyone. I know I don't haha.
Faith

haha, i bet i could make a difference if i tried! i was just trying to give you some advice!

but you're probably one of those girls that are all weak, and needy, and give in to whatever her bf wants, aren't you?

ha!
what a waste of a female body.

I like this. I think, while simple, it means a lot. Cause I agree, somethings you just have to let it out. So, good job. :)
Stay strong.
Faith

oh... i shouldn't complain about a week - a lot of people don't update even once a month...

is this about your boyfriend? if it is, slap him around a little - teach him to pay the fuck attention! don't take that shit, girl!

:|

good poem :) see you in a week :)
stay strong.
Faith

i like this. it's very strong. good job.

i hope that, soon, everything will be alright for you. that you will be alright.

yikes; you sound angry.

:( giving up?

ohh, this one is my favourite. especally the line, "just hold on. not to me, not to them. to yourself, god, don't lose yourself."

:)

wait,
is this a happy poem?
or a... just remembering poem?