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| Sofia Lemos da Costa 2008-06-14 ch 12,  | abuseYou havent updated this in forever! And I want more! It's 2:37 am and I've been up reading x) this story is addictive. Please finish it... Please? And me loved the Dumbo idea x) it was just too cute ^^ |
| blackoblivion13 2008-06-06 ch 12, | abuseThat's a great story! I can't wait for more! |
| Tobyk947 2008-05-27 ch 12, | abusei want an invisible plushie! i reviewed, please send me one! ;P |
| Tobyk947 2008-05-27 ch 9, | abuseteen Jude is awesome, love him! he's a "seer", isn't he? one of those freakily observant people. Jude's real name is... Julian? Why did he tell brian the truth? IS HE STUPID?! I wouldve lied my ** off. haha. Brian's freak out.. so spazztic... |
| Tobyk947 2008-05-27 ch 5, | abusei'm drowning in bugs! -sob- |
| Tobyk947 2008-05-27 ch 4, | abuseJude's so crazy, I love him! Jakob and Jude. XD |
| Thread of Life 2008-05-11 ch 12, | abuseO I really like this story. Jude is pretty awesome. |
| TheatrePhunk 2008-05-10 ch 12, | abuseOh come on, don't do this to me. Please don't stop this story right now! That's just mean. |
| Lucifer's Retarded Twin Sis... 2008-03-22 ch 12, | abusedumbo is such a saintly elephant~ can't wait till next update |
| Aibari 2008-03-18 ch 12, | abuseWell, this is certainly interesting. :) The format you use for Flynn's phone conversation is a bit annoying, because I keep reading it like Flynn is arguing with himself. It might work better if you used some description between the talking. Even if Brian has his eyes closed, he'd still be able to pick up sounds, movements and such. Flynn! You ejit! I dunno if he's Bad or if he's just pretending. (That'd be sort of amusing, really, him pretending.) And ... srsly, Dumbo? I suppose this is a good example of why you shouldn't do drugs. :P Looking forward to your next. :D |
| thismercisforhire 2008-03-17 ch 12, anon. | abuseWoah. WOAH! OH MY GOD IS FLYNN Working with Jakob?! Is is all some kind of set-up?! WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON?! Please update soon. need. to. KNOW. Oh by the way - awesome story XD Very cool. |
| Shampain86 2008-02-25 ch 12, | abuseWow. I hate you. :P Please keep writing! I love this story, I need MORE! |
| Athnyha 2008-02-21 ch 12, | abuseLove the story. Please continue, I'm loving the plot line. Thanks ^_^ |
| CarefullyIronic 2008-02-19 ch 12, | abuseek i love it |
| Miss Mysty 2008-02-15 ch 12, | abuseI know it's a day late, but do I still get a Dumbo Julian plushie? *grabs one from the pile and giggles evilly* I love this story; it's extremely entertaining, and funny and apropriately serious. Flynn is an awesome character, too. Be sure to keep writing, because I'll keep reviewing! |