Really honest- simple but smooth.

Very nice.

I've so far read a few of your poems and they all hold this sort of romantic tone

i really like them, keep writing. ]

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I really liked this. This is simple and honest and so real. It made me smile to imagine the speaker and subject. I was enchanted by the situation you created in these brief lines. I loved the line, “But I felt it, somewhere in my lungs where our oxygen had mingled.” Keep up the great work!

Really nice, charming piece of writing. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing!

abby