7-5-5- makes for an interesting tale. My favourite part was the beginning, "Twisted Love."

One thing I love about your style of writing is that I am always at a loss as to how I am to react. It is the same here. I feel sadness, yet I am comforted and my soul feels somewhat uplifted from the last line, though a finality is depicted. A lovely piece.

I like the 7-5-5.. its an interesting form.. the first line is really great and I love how you end with ... very sad and beautiful piece

I wish it was longer though.. it really left me wanting to know more about what happened

PS If you're bored today check out the review game's review marathon.. there's a link in my profile

I like this. I'm not sure how to interpret it, but when you mentioned puzzles and psalms, I got really happy. Anyway. Nice. :)

-pb

The ending made it seem unfinished, in a good way. I could picture the princess lying in a coffin with her hands folded over her chest.

The last line really brought me out of the haze why reading this haiku. I, at first, though I had grasped it when I read the first two lines, but now... I'm not really sure what to make of it.

This does remind me of a fairytaile, especially with the first line of the haiku.

Good job :)

I love the fairy tale feel to this. Not the 'happy ending' fairy tale, but the almost magical feel of this haiku really shines though the well chosen words. I really like the last line, too, and how it's left trailing off. Very well written haiku.

Peace, Daze