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| Isca 2008-07-05 ch 1,  | abuse7-5-5- makes for an interesting tale. My favourite part was the beginning, "Twisted Love." |
| Thenardier 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseOne thing I love about your style of writing is that I am always at a loss as to how I am to react. It is the same here. I feel sadness, yet I am comforted and my soul feels somewhat uplifted from the last line, though a finality is depicted. A lovely piece. |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abuseI like the 7-5-5.. its an interesting form.. the first line is really great and I love how you end with ... very sad and beautiful piece I wish it was longer though.. it really left me wanting to know more about what happened PS If you're bored today check out the review game's review marathon.. there's a link in my profile |
| windy girl 2007-11-07 ch 1, | abuseI like this. I'm not sure how to interpret it, but when you mentioned puzzles and psalms, I got really happy. Anyway. Nice. :) -pb |
| tearing hands 2007-11-06 ch 1, | abuseThe ending made it seem unfinished, in a good way. I could picture the princess lying in a coffin with her hands folded over her chest. |
| Kusje 2007-11-04 ch 1, | abuseThe last line really brought me out of the haze why reading this haiku. I, at first, though I had grasped it when I read the first two lines, but now... I'm not really sure what to make of it. This does remind me of a fairytaile, especially with the first line of the haiku. Good job :) |
| sleeping Pisces 2007-11-04 ch 1, | abuseI love the fairy tale feel to this. Not the 'happy ending' fairy tale, but the almost magical feel of this haiku really shines though the well chosen words. I really like the last line, too, and how it's left trailing off. Very well written haiku. Peace, Daze |