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| Barbados 2007-11-04 ch 1,  | abuse"You called your fire deadly and said your claws were swords You said that trees were flowers and seas tiny fords". That pair of lines alone was worth reading this for, although I did enjoy the rest of it to. It was fun, and I felt like I should be singing it, not just saying it. The flow was pretty decent, although I'm not entirely sure how effective wiping your sword on a rock is... Well done at any rate. :) |