Yes, the word 'Myspace' just isn't very poetic. Next century, perhaps. But this is a good piece. I know those girls.

i don't really like the namedropping of myspace
(though i, too, think the site epitomizes the rediculousness of today, it just isn't very fit for a poem)
and the title is really bland
but i love this piece.
and ** love to death the guy getting fountain water.
your imagery fits and you put it in the right places
and i really liked the italics (though i thought the dramatic spaces were a little off-ish)
the ending is very right, and i love the little sparkle in the last line.